Swish - Falling Into You Help! Entering Poem Into Contest...need Critics Opinions, Pls?

Help! Entering poem into contest...need critics opinions, pls? - swish - falling into you

I have read it and I've never done it on stage. Should I a touch of style to him with smiles, winks, movement of the hand or be dark, and are only playing there? You think it's funny in a few lines?

Paper Trails

Thus, the prejudice and the queen, smiling, half meaning
These are the topics - like it gives us the talk of the sink
And the cruelest sort of ridicule and rejection
This silence, a bitter silence, without distraction.

By perpetuating a cat with an indication of a loop
The constant rubbing of a Buddha ***
And he has three copies of their suspicions of the Day
Threshold of being signed, the form of changes to our satisfaction.

There is no structure in the palace, more or less
The moonlight of the Queen with the crushing of Thieves
Barefoot, under the old pine and spicy, a merry whistle
Mosaic Launch tissue slovenly fall as they did.

Stunned by the refusal of the cicada sings today evening
She whispers, alwaysAnthem, as if rocking
Collection of your garden as the leaf tissue of butter on the moon
Tears, no trace of paper, no paper trail, sighs.


01.08 copywrited my next book, "Saline Smiles" by Michelle Boleyn.